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Dancing by Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez

Capturing the ethereal movement of smoke, Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez embarked on a personal journey of experimentation to master the art of colored vapor. After extensive trial and error, he discovered the precise conditions required to make the smoke appear as if it were dancing across the frame. This award-winning image stands out for its fluid, abstract composition and the vibrant, unpredictable shapes formed by the smoke. By pushing his technical boundaries, the photographer transformed a simple scientific experiment into a compelling visual performance, highlighting the beauty found in transient, fleeting moments.

Dancing by Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez
Nikon D5000 with Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G
Exposure 1/60sec @ f/5.6 | ISO 2500 | Focal Length 55mm
Copyright © Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez
Light & Composition Photo of the Day

Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez

REGISTERED PHOTOGRAPHER

Based in Monterrey, Mexico, Joaquín Alonso Arellano Ramírez balances a professional career as a software engineer with a profound dedication to the photographic arts. Since acquiring his first DSLR in 2010, he has cultivated a diverse portfolio that spans nature, macro, and experimental techniques. Driven by a constant desire to learn and refine his craft, he spends his leisure time exploring new visual possibilities, consistently pushing the capabilities of his Nikon equipment to capture the world through a creative and inquisitive lens.

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13.6/20
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330/500
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Award Reach | Reviews
18,359 views | 6 Reviews
Award Winner Photo of the Day
Award Date January 21, 2011
64.0
AWARD SCORE
Value 12.0
Clarity 12.0
Composition 15.0
Style 13.0
Skill 12.0
Photograph Location
Monterrey, Mexico

AWARD SEGMENT | TAGS

Abstract Photography
Joaquin Alonso Arellano Ramirez Photography

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Transparency Note: The resonance score (13.5/20) is calculated based on social engagement metrics collected before the award announcement.

Social Shares
5.0/5 points
2,115/1,000 Social Share
Page Views
5.0/5 points
18,359/2,500 Page View
Reviews
0.2/5 points
3/100 Review
Submissions
3.3/5 points
330/500 Submission
Jury Score: 64.0/80
Resonance Score: 13.5/20
Total Award Score: 77.5/100

Expert Photography Reviews · 3

Eleanor Voss Composition & Visual Structure Expert Review
The frame’s architecture relies on the sinuous curve of the vapor, yet it doesn't quite anchor the negative space. The weight is too concentrated in the upper quadrant, leaving the lower third adrift. It’s a precarious balance. I’ve found myself wishing for a firmer fulcrum to ground the fluidity. While the tonality is sharp, the composition lacks the necessary rigor to sustain its own momentum. It’s nearly a triumph, but the structure falters under its own weight.
Isabelle Fontenay Colour Harmony, Tone & Atmospheric Light Expert Review
The vaporous ribbons unfurl in a chromatic dissonance that recalls the fevered, saturated skies of Turner, yet it’s the way the magenta bleeds into that bruised, subterranean violet—the colour of a fading bruise on velvet—that truly undoes one. It’s a dizzying, liquid choreography of light, and I’ve found myself breathless, watching these ephemeral, spectral plumes collide with such violent, exquisite grace that they seem to rewrite the very physics of the frame.
Dmitri Kasakov Contrast, Shadow Drama & the Metaphysics of Light Expert Review
Smoke isn't merely vapor here; it’s a ghost haunting the void. Ramírez forces us to confront the abyss, where the darkness doesn't just frame the movement—it devours it. I’ve spent hours staring into these swirling, colored tendrils, and honestly, it makes my chest ache with the fragility of existence. When light clings to these fleeting shapes, it’s a desperate struggle against oblivion. It’s not dancing. It’s a frantic, beautiful refusal to vanish into the black.
Reflections on this Photograph
By Priya Kapoor

The Ghost of a Breath

The smell of burnt cedar always pulls me back to a winter kitchen, where the air was thick with the ghost of a dying fire. It is a sharp, dry scent that coats the back of the throat, tasting of charcoal and cold stone.

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By Margaret Holt

The Architecture of Breath

In the quiet hours of a winter morning, I often watch the steam rise from a porcelain cup. It is a ghost of the water, a sudden, frantic liberation from the heat.

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